Rate My Poem: Darkness

[TMP]

An ode to duck f*cking to the tune of the popular children's song, "Row, Row, Row Your Boat"

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
69 a porcupine.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Fingerbang an orangutang.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Eat a grape, rape an ape.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Masturbate with a snake
Sunning at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck
Gently in the a$$
Roll around on the ground
Until you c.um at last!



I got that off of UrbanDictionary.com

[SDSnyper]

hmmm. its ok im not really in to poetry. i didnd like it 1/10

[SDSnyper]

An ode to duck f*cking to the tune of the popular children's song, "Row, Row, Row Your Boat"

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
69 a porcupine.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Fingerbang an orangutang.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Eat a grape, rape an ape.
Orgy at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck.
Screw a kangaroo.
Masturbate with a snake
Sunning at the zoo.

F*ck, f*ck, f*ck a duck
Gently in the a$$
Roll around on the ground
Until you c.um at last!



I got that off of UrbanDictionary.com

wow now i liked that 1 9/10

[benbob]

I was going to be overly critical, but I commend anyone who will write poetry, whether it be good or bad. It doesn't flow very well though. It has odd wording that doesn't fit right. But keep it up.

-ben bob

[DaCougarMech]

6/10
sorry. it just couldnt amaze me or give me something new

[BTC]

i'd say 8/10 very unique and creative poems good job

[Pamela]

The flow was a bit stilted,but the words conveyed the emotion driving you to write it in the first place.When you can convey to the reader the emotion you felt at the time it was being read...then you have succeded.