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Valentines Poems
#1
I made one for my special one here it is:

You are

The only one to lift me from my sorrows.
To come down and numb my pain.
The only to make me feel like im on cloud nine.
Feeling so fine.
So well.
Helping me esacpe this hell on earth.
You give my life worth.
Never wanting to say farewell.
I am forever in debt to the queen.
You are my vaccine.
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#2
it's very sweet, in a romantic way, but the last line kinda killed it, the vaccine thing. uinless that has a specific purpose, it was kinda odd.
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#3
It's a bit of a inside thing, she loved it.
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#4
Mine's simple and funny, but it worked o_O

Roses are red
Violets are blue
All of my base
Are belong to you

=D
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#5
good that she loved it. that's what you were aiming for anyways, right?

Roses are red,
Violets are blue.
Some poems don't rhyme,
like this one.
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