Graphic Free Thought [Poem]

[Obfuscate]

The below is a bit of free thought...hence the name "Graphic Free Thought". To boot it is rather graphic so those easily made sick STOP READING! Those easily offended STOP READING!

Constuctive crticicism(SP?) is as always welcome.

I'm addicted to your pain
I'm addicted to your suffering

Hold me down and cut me open

Bind me in chains and clutch my throat

Let the knife cut true

Make the blood run deep

I’m addicted to your pain

I’m addicted your suffering

Throw me against the wall

Shove my head and pull my hair



Gasping and thrashing

Hold me still

Lick my wounds

Purr sweet nothings in my ear

And do it all again



Tie me to the bed

With
t.h.o.r.n.y vines

Beat me and bite me

Give reason to scream and reason to bleed

Show no compassion

Just

Vengeance

No justice

Remorse

Twist and pinch my skin

Make it crawl into my skull



Breathless and tired

Massage my skin

Kiss my welts

Whisper the words

Fantastic

Great

Make me safe for an hours time

Then do it all again

[JesseDS]

That was rather grousum.(SP?) But, nonetheless, it was stall a great poem. I really enjoyed it. Did you think of it yourself?

[Obfuscate]

All of the poetry I post is completely original and comes straight from the chrome dome on my shoulders.

Thanks.

[El Matt]

Very nice.

[ghosts2003]

Was that like from some gothic porno?

[Obfuscate]

Was that like from some gothic porno?

porno...poetry....porno...poetry...when was the last time you watched a porno where they recited poetry?

[Lycshiftz]

OMG THATS AN EASY ONE! Last night at my friends house.

[Foog]

I liked it. Some nice BDSM action in there, haha. You write very good poetry. I think it's great. I wish i knew that the **** was?

[Obfuscate]

t.h.o.r.n.y is the ******

[Za avatar]

Wow very nice....Can't really say i have heard better for along time

2 thumbs up!