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Peom: I Love You So
#1
Life is a fleeting thing.
Only joy until pain.
I ask you one last dance.
I ask you to smile one last time.

This depression so deep.
Like a void ever growing.
Only joy you have brought to me.
Now uncertainty lays ahead.

This is your winter.
Only pain.
Lets hope it will be quick.
Lets hope your spring, again starts soon.

I only wish for you to find your love.
For you to find your true and only joy.
Just to have your wish’s.
For you to stay Alive.

I leave you now, in my deepest pain.
I hope never again I feel this depression.
I love you so.
I love you so.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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#2
Very nice prose! Great emotional usage of words.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...
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#3
Pretty, great write.
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#4
Thank's to you both. I appreciate the sentament.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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