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Poem: The Dusk
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The Dusk
We look foreword
To the never-ending sky
The dusk is fading
To the night.

I think back to the beginning
Of this long road.
This path of gold.
And wonder where it will take me

This light I have become
To aid the one's I love
Will this always be me
Or will I become the night

Can I keep going
On this long path
Will I find its end
And finally Ascend

I think if she is here
I will find the way is clear
I will find my way
And stay in the day
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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#2
Nicely written^^ it was good,and made me think of our everyday struggles and how we take each as it comes.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...
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