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Poem: Speak now or forever hold your peace..
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09-23-2006, 10:58 AM
It was good.Yes some parts did not flow as well as others. This,however is not the point. The saddness and regret expressed were a powerful feeling that rocked me. Damn good job. The words were eloquent and descriptive.I applaud you.....this is the whole function of poetry.To convey in words what the heart is screaming.
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Poem: Speak now or forever hold your peace.. - by Pamela - 09-23-2006, 10:58 AM

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