Poem: Speak now or forever hold your peace..

[Z3R0]

I wish I could write like this without the personal feelings, sadly everything I do write requires some sort of feeling within. Without the emotion, words don't form =(

I think it an excellent piece. It is in sonet style in most senses other than sonents are only fourteen lines long. You put the words together quite addequetly. Do not be worried with not being able to put random words together and make a brillant spectacle; that will come with education and practice. Ussualy the best writers speak from personal feelings, this is because every person feels the same feelings, just in differant manners. That makes people relate to your work. Keep up the good work and let me know if you need any help. I am very good at literature.

I sense that it is about a delima that you recently faced, a hard decision for you to make. It seemed that whichever path you chose to tread would lead to obvious pain and regret. Look at it this way, sometimes you have to endure pain and sadness in order to achieve self meaning and gain happiness. Do focus on what might happen the next day, focus instead on what you wish to happen the next year.