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Temptations (Poem)
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You can really get a sense of uncertainty.Almost as if the subject wants,yet can not have.A sense of yearning and perhaps indecision on how to go about satisfying needs.
just my take on it,and well written,good job!
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Temptations (Poem) - by Frai7ty - 12-15-2007, 05:15 AM
Temptations (Poem) - by Pamela - 12-21-2007, 05:33 AM
Temptations (Poem) - by hellsing293 - 12-21-2007, 12:02 PM
Temptations (Poem) - by Frai7ty - 12-21-2007, 05:43 PM

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