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Poem: Feelings of Why
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I Have Feelings of Why
I Cannot Deny
My Love for this World
Mysteries. Symphonies.
Of How it Works
I Have Feelings of Why
My Mind Can't Reside
In One Place at a Time
I Have Feelings of Why
Just of Why,
Am I in this Place
For A Lifetime
Of Misery and Grace





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The_Avenger Wrote:I Have Feelings of Why
I Cannot Deny
My Love for this World
Mysteries. Symphonies.
Of How it Works
I Have Feelings of Why
My Mind Can't Reside
In One Place at a Time
I Have Feelings of Why
Just of Why,
Am I in this Place
For A Lifetime
Of Misery and Grace


I think it was beautifully written and evoked my emotions.
It flowed very well...very nice work.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

A Light in your Darkness...always there...and burning...
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Thank you Pamela Smile
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